Age of the Gray

Chapter1 pg 26/28

Any suggestions or tips are more than welcome!

Age of the Gray

Chapter1 pg 25/28

Any suggestions or tips are more than welcome!

Especially composition. I know it needs work. OTL

Age of the Gray

Chapter1 pg 14/24

Any tips or critiques are more than welcome!  

Wow it’s been a while since I’ve updated.  Been busy.  But I’m super excited to submit this page because I really love Lailah~

Age of the Gray

Chapter1 pg 13/24

Any tips or critiques are more than welcome!  

Age of the Gray

Chapter1 pg 12/24

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Age of the Gray

Chapter1 pg 11/24

Any tips or critiques are more than welcome!  

I pictured that transformation would look like this

Age of the Gray

Chapter1 pg 10/24

Any tips or critiques are more than welcome!  

Also, I really tried to pay attention to reading flow this time, I even went out and bought some awesome Marvel comics to study. Hopefully it’s paid off! 

Age of the Gray

Chapter1 pg 9/24

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Creepy old lady in a NY back alley?  What could go wrong?!

Age of the Gray

Chapter1 pg 8/24

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This particular page is probably my least favorite; too much dialogue and not a good reading flow. A little difficult to change once it’s inked unfortunately. Also, decided to stop shading Simon’s hair, it was too solid.